Notes from Melanie
overview
A screenwriter known for ripoff "mockbusters" asks his successful former colleague for feedback on his first serious script.
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cast
Mason Heidger
Joe
KateLynn E. Newberry
Melanie
John Flickinger
Johnny Flexster
Matthew Brando
Dinosaur Victim / Construction Worker
Rob Grant
Dinosaur Victim